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  59. Live life in a hurry or at a slower pace?

  Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  『分析』

  两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。

  我们真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full composure),却很有效率(efficient)。所以,我更倾向于careful planning。[51],因为careful planning是成功的关键。

  另外,也要看是什么样的事情,工作、学习,都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible),但是与朋友消遣,与家人相伴,却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而应该at a slower place。

  『范文』

  I used to live at a frantic pace. My wristwatch dictated my life, and the hands of the clock pushed me forward to my next appointment, my next assignment, and my next social engagement. However, I have managed to relax. Now that I live my life at a slower pace I have become a better student, a more reliable friend, and a person who enjoys life much more than before.

  Living life at a slower pace has allowed me to pay much more attention to detail and to work through my Page 62 of 201

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  assignments at school more thoroughly. Before I was always rushing through my reading and my writing, and my concentration was not very strong. The clubs and sports teams I belonged to demanded a lot of attention. After I decided to get rid of some of the more involved activities I had more time to focus on my studies and the results have shown in my marks.

  While I am still busy with school and extra curricular activities, I also make a point of slowing down and taking a step back in order to prioritize the things in my life. This allows me to evaluate how much time I should spend on one thing or another. For example, while I was hurrying through my schedule I often lost track of my friends. I forgot about dates that we made and things that I agreed to do for them. This will not happen now. By slowing down the tempo and realizing how important my pals are to me, I have once again become a reliable friend.

  Lastly, living life at a slower pace allows me to appreciate the good things in my life. In the past I would only think about the things I would have to get accomplished next. This anticipation did not allow me to concentrate on the moment, but now I am able to enjoy a family dinner or an afternoon at the movies with my friends without worrying about what I am supposed to do next.

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