Talk about a popular gathering place in your town where people like to go.
Describe the place and explain why people enjoy going there. Include specific
examples and details in your response. 要求描述一个人们爱聚集的一个地方并解释原因。
In my opinion, people in my town like to go to the central park for two
To begin with, they can do some exercise there. A lot of people will go to the
park to do some sports to keep healthy. Sometimes the whole family will get
together in the park to do exercise.
In addition,people could enjoy the beautiful views in the park and they feel
relaxed. They can get close to nature and release pressure from work or study.
So that’s why people in my town will go to the park.
我们来分析这个段子，开门见山给出topic—park, 用两个理由支撑—do exercise and enjoy views，但整个答案欠缺的就是细节充实的问题。比如do exercise后面，考生可以直接列出具体细节：
People like to play Tai Chi or go jogging in the morning,and the whole family
may get together to go for a walk after dinner or play badminton in the park.
直接给出这种细节描述exercise让段子更生动，而不是一直重复people do exercise or do sports.
同样的，第二层关于enjoy beautiful views后面也可以增加一些具体的景物描写，trees, flowers, lake, bridge, fountain等。
Well, a gathering place in my town is the central park.
One reason is that the park provides people a place to do some exercise. For
example, old people would play Tai Chi in the early morning, students may go
jogging around the park, and the whole family could go for a stroll after
dinner. By doing some sports, they can keep healthy and energetic.
Plus, people have the chance to get close to nature and escape from the rest of
the city like the concrete buildings, loads of schoolwork and huge pressure
from work. I mean, they could feel the fresh air blowing their face, the smell
of the flowers in the park.
So that’s why citizens like to go to the park.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students benefit more from classes with a large number of students than they do
from smaller classes. Use specific examples and details to support your
学生的回答提纲是： smaller class is better
1)Get more personal attention from professor
比如：taking myself as an example, last summer, I took
park in a painting training class and there were only five students in the
class, so I got more time to interact with the teacher about my weakness in
说：Students can concentrate better in smaller class
because it’s more quiet.
后面的思路就枯竭了，这个时候就可以用举反例的细节扩展方法：however, in bigger
classes, there are so many people that they may easily talk, laugh, joke around
or gossip, which makes noise in the class to distract others.
例：Describe the most efficient type of transportation in
your country. Use details and examples to explain your response.
Reason 1: fast，save time
Reason 2: no traffic congestion
For example,it only takes me 2 hours to fly from one city to another, however,
when Ichoose to take train, it may cost me more than 20 hours.充分说明taking airplane is more efficient.
例2：You prefer to watch movie in
the movie theater or at home.
Topic: at home
Reason 1: save money
Reason 2: have more options when choosing movies
对于第一个理由，我们可以用倍数形式来显示在家看电影多省钱：watching movies in the
movie theater costs 2 times more than watching same movies at home.
The building is very tall.
The building is as tall as 468 meters, ranking first in Asia and third in the
world. There are 68 spheres in the building and the three biggest ones are
observatories, where tourists can have a birds-eye view of the whole city. It
has been the land mark of the city since it was completed.
There is a lot of traditional Chinese food.
There is a lot of traditional Chinese food like Fried rice with egg, Gong pao
Chicken, Ma Po Tofu, Dumplings, Pecking Duck and so on.
Example 2. 那里风景优美。
It has beautiful scenery there.
It has beautiful scenery there. I can smell the grass and flowers,hear the
cries of the birds, and feel the bracing breeze on my face.
I would be able to know about interesting stuff in the foreign countries.
I would be able to know about interesting stuff including their customs,
cultures, and histories.
例1. describe a person you admire the most. Give
specific details and examples.
学生回答：Well, the person I admire the most is my English
teacher Lee, who was teaching me at junior high school. Here is some reasons
I’d like to share with you.
For starters, my English teacher Lee is really responsible, he paid a lot of
attention on our school work and paper and help us improve.
Plus, he has a sense of humor. He always tell us some stories to make us laugh,
so we feel relaxed in his class. All the students like his class.
So, that is why I admire my English teacher most! Thank you.
分析：对于人物的描述，核心在人物的性格(quality,characteristics, features)的一个描写，该生描述老师responsible 和 humorous，但是都不充分，我们需要给出具体的表现和例子。
Responsible—for example, he would use his spare time to give us lots of
detailed comments on our paper in order to make us improve.
Humorous—he may tell us some funny jokes or stories or even imitate the
behaviors of Mr.Bean in the class, thus, we all feel relaxing in the class and
can study much better.
例2.Is it beneficial for students to have computers? Use
details and examples in your response.
As far as I am concerned,I think it is good for students to have computers.
The most important reason is that they can improve their study efficiency. They
can use computer to search for some useful information to study better.
Another reason is that they can entertain themselves by using computer.
Students have huge pressure in study, when they go back home, they could use
the computer to release pressure.
Search for some useful information using the computer à For example, when they
write the paper or do research, they can find some materials or resources
online like the data, the examples, the statistical tests and soon.
Entertain themselves and release pressure à for instance,they could watch some
movies, listen to music or play games to escape from the loads of problems in
例3.Describe a subject which is difficult but also
important. Use details and examples in your response.
学生回答：well, the subject which is difficult but important
To begin with, it is difficult. I am poor in math; I think I have to spend a
lot of time doing the math problems.
However,math is also very important. If I can’t study math well, I will also
fail in some other science class like the physics.
needs strong logical ability, I have to recite lots of formulas and theories;
it’s too abstract, hard to understand.
例4. Describe an interesting book you have ever read.
Give specific reasons and details in your response.
学生回答：In my opinion,one interesting I have read is a
cooking book, which is sent from my friend jerry before I went abroad to study.
To begin with, I can learn how to cook using this book. It teaches me to do
some traditional Chinese food and also even some simple foreign food. If I can
cook food, I can take care of myself and even invite some classmates and
friends to enjoy food cooked by me.
In addition, I could also learn some culture from other countries by knowing
比如在描写这本书能teach me cook.最好可以讲讲里面的内容和特色： it shows me the specific steps while cooking the food, even adds a
lot of vivid pictures, which makes it easier to follow while doing it by
此外第二点也是一样，只是提到learn some foreign culture about the
干脆后面再给一个例子，for instance, When I make the sushi, a type
of Japanese food, I learn that people in Japan like to eat some raw food, which
is considered to be more nutritious.