In the reading passage, the author gives three reasons to explain\ asserts that…
On the other hand, the lecture casts doubt on it by refuting these explanations point by point.
However, the professor in the lecture opposed to this notion and points out that it suffers from three main drawbacks\ the writter failed to consider the following essential points.
Initially, the reading states that…, while the professor disagrees this idea by issue the fact that…
Equally, refering to…, the professor refuted the point in the reading passge. From the lecture’s point of view…. In particular,…
Finally, the professor augued that… In other words,… This opposed to the notion asserted in the article
背景XX is synonymous with
XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for
+People’s opinions are divergent on this complex and controversial issue
+ Some believe… some other insist
+ In my personal perspective, the latter is better. + XXX should …., because 原因1+原因2+原因3
These days we often hear about… Some argue… But has it? Close examinatio fails to bear out the argument.
反问+Although I agree that…has considerable merit with respect to…, I take exception with the claim when it comes to the direction of…
While I agree with the assertion that+反面观点改写+Nevertheless+观点+My points of contention with this oversimplized notion involve…,…and…, as discussed below.
Years of observing the human behavior enabled me to conclude that…lies solely with…
In spite of the extrodinary progress made in science and technology, problems remain in terms of…
Never before in the history have the issue of… be more serrated than now.
Perhaps no issue are more controversial than…
Many people are of the opinion that…But in spite of…, I believe…
There has been undeirable trend in recent years toward…
结尾段 In sum, 观点总结。 Admittedly… Yet this is not the golden role that can be invalid in some special ocassion.
Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一，agree or disagree,除了个别);
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景)，
XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for our future success/
XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/
XXplays an essential/increasingly important role in…/
XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 ,
However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改写题目1.
Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___编____”
I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question:改写题目2.
Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要).
Sample two：(如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time，就用下面的)
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))/ On account of …，XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX
plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).
However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA
not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).
Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from
_______ is that__________/ First and foremost,
On one hand_________, On the other hand_________
Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.
Further lending credence to my position is that____________
(简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________,…..(例子见后面)
一句话总结例子：As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样
Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____
/has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______
However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./
二选一：Admittedly, BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) However，BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, )it pales.
Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用), I reinforce my stand point that
Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;
only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;
and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______
It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)
On account of/owing to/due to+ N
For the reason that/as/since+句子
It is due to____that
eg:It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(强调句)
eg:His success derives from his persistence and perseverance.
ascribe A to B 归结于
eg: His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseveranc
A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)
If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________
Despite the fact that/regardless of
Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__
ef: Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know about
American typical type of spending leisure time.
ef: Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid
Not only 主谓倒装 but also...
eg: Not only should education prepare children to compete
Not only do people care their economic needs,they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.
On no account 主谓倒装(决不....)
probably/directly or indirectly/to some(a large) extent
It is tourism that gives me the opportunity to know the culture of this dynamic, robust and alive country.
It is computers that make our life diverse,convenient,dynamic/ vibrant, without which our life would probably pale.
A/which needs to be/In this way, A can be readily accepted,
respected,appreciated and advocated.
Only via university education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration. And Only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.
Effectively and efficiently
Gradually and eventually
It is not difficult for us to imagine that 不难想象
B makes it possible for us to have an universal access to A/A is readily available. A容易得到
In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society, people have no choice but to work and study hard.
Ruthless and relentless无形/fierce and intense competition
The ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pressure on each and every individual, and therefore, there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future, enabling us to survive and thrive in the modern world.
Inspiration, aspiration and perspiration
Vision,passion and mission
I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore. Only after going shopping on Orchard road, the main shopping district in Singapore,did I realize what "a paradise for shopping"really was. Only after roaming in the City Hall,the financial center of Singapore, did I experience the quick pace of modern life. Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.
For example, on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society, employers tend to hire people equipped with a wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited knowledge.
I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that the average sleeping time an adult has everyday, compared with 8 hours in the 1970s,
has decreased to 6.8 hours due to the busy work and study.