托福写作成绩,想要有全面的提升,大家也需要找对具体的备考方法。这些对于我们更全面的来备考练习,也会有更好的帮助。那么具体的这些方法是什么?如何更高好的复习?下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容,供大家参考!

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  自我认知——独立写作首先,我们来看24分+的同学当前的独立写作问题,往往符合以下5条中至少2条:

  1. 内容:行文中可以把题中的关键信息基本阐释清楚,但部分段落内容表达不足;

  2. 行文:行文中有合理的理由和恰当的例子,但仍没有把细节部分解释清楚,或者解释有偏差;

  3. 逻辑:文章的逻辑大致连贯,但仍有不流畅之处,例如说废话、重复和颠倒逻辑;

  4. 用词:行文中包含多种复杂句和多样化的词汇,但仍有少部分不够地道的表达或者中式英语,甚至是直接翻译中文;

  以某同学的作业为例:In order to obtain higher living quality, people should purchase some hi-tech products like sweeping robots, micro-electronic cookers and auto laundry machines. Since these gadgets help them to save time and energy on household work, they can spare more time on some things for fun like watching movies, going shopping and reading novels. Without these useful facilities, people have to do the work by themselves and cannot satisfy their spiritual needs.问题:1. something for fun拼错了,而且是口语;2. spiritual needs和higher living quality关系没说明白,也没说明白something for fun和higher living quality的因果关系;3. spiritual needs和do the work by themselves并不能形成别列关系,二者之间的因果逻辑没说明白

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  自我认知——综合写作然后,我们来看24分+的同学当前的综合写作问题,往往符合以下2条:

  1. 少量听力细节缺失,或细节描述不准;

  2. 有语言表达问题,但不影响读者读懂。

  以某同学的作业为例:TPO 5: Lastly, the reading passage proposed that the Chaco structure was used for a ceremonial center since the excavation of the mound revealed deposits of a surprising huge number of broken pots and they might be discarded after meals. In opposition, the lecturer claimed that this theory is convincing since there were a large amount of construction materials like sand, stone, and construction tools in the mound. Actually, the mound was a trash heap, piled up by things. Thus, the claim the Chaco structure was used for ceremonial purpose cannot hold water.错误:1. used for a ceremonial center应是used for a ceremonial purpose 或 was a ceremonial center2. things 缺少修饰成分“ not used, thrown away”

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  解决问题——独立写作

  1. 大量阅读范文,积累地道的词汇和句式;

  2. 刷完2015、2016、2017年的全部机经题目,掌握解题思路;

  3. 训练立论段的连贯性和细节性;

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  解决问题——综合写作

  1. 重点刷题TPO 40-54 的题目,并比照听力原文,修改细节;

  2. 未听出的细节部分重听,注意发音现象(重读、弱读、连读或重音);

  以上就是关于“托福写作成绩应该如何提升”的内容,想要更好地申请留学,那么大家在备考的过程中,就要更好地提高我们的语言成绩,这样在我们之后的申请中才能有更大的帮助。小编也提前预祝大家能够取得高分成绩。


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