托福写作的训练中,关于影响高分的具体因素,考生们必须要清楚了解。这是大家接下来复习备考的关键,也是大家提分的重点。具体的这些高分因素是什么?如何更好进行复习备考呢?下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容,供大家参考!

  一、写作细节

  1.Main point如何确立?

  根据题库可将作文题目分成四类:

  1.1A+-型:一个事物的正负面影响

  Example 154

  Hook Imp + contro

  Bridge Parents and educators find themselves constantly confrontment with the question, “are……问题?”

  A+ MP I believe the answer is yes.

  A+1 Provide incentives

  A+2 Improve on weaknesses

  A+3

  Con

  A- MP I believe the answer is no.

  A-1 Create excessive stress

  A-2 Harm all around development

  A-3

  Con

  A+>A- MP I believe the answer is a qualified yes, despite some negative consequences, scores often far more benefit.

  A+1

  A+2

  A-1

  A->A+ MP I believe the answer is a qualified no, despite some benefit consequences, scores often far more negative.

  A+>A-/A-.A+;although; despite the fact that; despite.

  Example:

  Although/despite the fact that it gives rise to problems and challenges, A brings greater benefits.

  Despite some problems and challenges, A brings greater benefits.

  Example 144

  A+- MP I believe the answer is yes and no. scores are mixed blessings.

  On the one hand

  A+ on the one hand, scores encourages students to study harder.

  A+1.

  A+2…

  On the other hand

  A- on the other hand, scores can have negative consequences.

  A-1

  A-2…

  Example 74

  Hook Imp + contro

  Bridge 设问

  A- MP I agree with this opinion.

  A-1 Harms health

  A-2 Impacts learning

  A-3 Leads to rises in crimes

  Con

  A+ MP I disagree with this opinion.

  A+1 Disseminate inter

  A+2 Enhance learning

  A+3 Improve friendship

  Con

  A->A+ MP Basically (Essentially), I agree with this opinion. Although it offers some benefits, television has far more negative impacts.

  A-1

  A-2

  A+1

  A+- MP I believe television is a mixed blession.

  On the one hand, A+

  On the one hand, A-

  Case by case MP My stance should be determined on a case by case basis.

  Educational programs promote the development of adolescents.

  Case1 Discovery series —scientific facts and theories

  Case2 Family album — language learning

  Inappropriate or indecent programs have harmful effects.

  Case1 Smoking scene —harm health

  Case2 Sex and violence content —commit

  Con

  1.2AB型:两个不同的事物选择

  Example 78

  A-outdoor; B-indoor

  A(1) MP I believe outdoor activities are superior.

  A+1 Enjoy a congenial environment.

  A+2 Have more physical activities.

  A+3 Exciting and thrilling. (bungee jumping)

  Con

  A(2) MP

  A+1

  A+2

  B-1 Undermine health.

  A(3) MP Although indoor activities have their merits, I believe outdoor activists are superior because they have greater benefits.

  A+1

  A+2

  B+1

  B(1) MP Indoor activities are better choices.

  B+1 Convenient

  B+2 Comfortable

  B+3 Safe

  Con

  B(2) MP Indoor activities

  B+1

  B+2

  A-1 Dangerous

  Con

  B(3) MP Although outdoor activities have their merits, I believe indoor activists are superior because they have greater benefits.

  B+1

  B+2

  A+1

  Con

  Case by case MP The answer to that question should be determined on a case by case basis.

  In many cases, outdoor activities are better choices.

  以上就是关于“托福写作笔记之高分重点”的内容,相信大家对接下来的备考内容,有更清晰的了解。考试成绩的高分,并不是一蹴而就的,大家还是需要踏踏实实的练习备考,才能真正的提升我们的分数。


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