托福写作部分中,具体的开头技巧,有利于大家写出更好的开头内容,吸引读者。那么在日常的训练中,针对开头部分的具体方法,大家要熟练的掌握。这样在考试中,我们才能够更好的写作。下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容,供大家参考!

  背景引入句

  开头段是非常重要的,开头写好后,后面的思路就会顺畅很多。曾经有人发起投票:你看过最好的文章开头是什么?得票率最高的一篇是“双城记”,我们一起来感受一下:

  It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way- in short, the period was so far like the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or forevil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.

  ——Charles Dickens "A Tale of Two Cities"

  表示时间的词有:times、age、epoch、season 这些都是"时间"多样性的表达,这就符合我们前面说的语言多样性。

  表示反向意义的词有:the best、the worst、wisdom、foolishness、belief、incredulity、light、darkness。把事物的两面性呈现的非常的精妙,这种没有办法去辩驳的方式适用于大多数情况。读着就感觉非常的大气,读到这样的文字也会让人陷入思考,也经得起思考,所以这样的文字才可能成为经典。在拿到这样的开头时我们就知道,两面性呈现的无法让人辩驳。每件事物都是这个样子,都存在两面性,这样的开头是读者希望看到的,留下深刻印象的。

  注意了,很多人的开头都会用With the development of science,society or economy......(随着.......发展),叙述一种趋势。而后半句往往与前半句没有逻辑联系。而且这种句式是非常容易与人撞车的。即使后面的内容再精彩,也会让考官对你的印象大打折扣。所以,引入的第一句话相对比较难,也非常重要!!!

  举一个栗子

  关于现状:

  话题一:

  Do you agree or disagree with the folowing statement?

  Grades encourage students to learn.

  Use specific reaasons and examples to support your answer.

  Having a glimpse of the current situation in (纵观当今......的现状)education around the globe, we may marvel at the large variety of exminations students must take each semester. Apparently, giving grades is considered one of the most common methods to evaluate the performance of a student. the entire teaching system cannot do without it.

  话题二:

  Choose a large company or a small company?

  Having a glimpse of the current situation in today's increasingly vigorous job markets,we may found that two-way selection has become a typical mode of employment.

  站在现在看过去状况:

  话题一:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Daily homework is necessary for students.

  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  Tracing back to(追溯到......)my school years, teachers used to give us a heavy load of homework. In fact, the tradition of doing assignment after school is still adopted in all schools today.

  话题二:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  The government should focus its budget more on young children's education than on universities.

  Use specific reasons and example s to support your answer.

  从......的重要性方面引入:

  As the cradle of learning , school play a central role in cultivating the new generation of a country's economic development. Thus, it's important that a sound(健全的) educational system be established and well-maintained.

  改写观点句:

  two roads diverged in a yellow wood.

  Choosing a job: one with more vacation time, or one with high paying but less vacation time?

  Whenever asked about their attitude towards satisfactory career choices, people usually exhibit an air of uncertainty. With regards to the different types of jobs, some prefer to work with more vacation time, believing a job with high salary but leisure time is not appropriate for them.

  The government should focus more on preserving natural environment and less on economic development.

  用疑问句呈现

  Should the government allow the slowdown of economic development by focusing mainly on natural perseveration? Or should emphasis be laid upon the rapid advancement of economy at the cost of a deteriorated environment?

  个人观点句

  如何替换I think, I believe 这样的表达?

  Working 3 days a week with long hours or working 5 days a week with short hours?

  If I were given the opportunity to decide on my own working schedule, I would prefer to work 3 days a week with long hours instead of working 5 days a week with short hours.

  Adervertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.

  Therefore, it is rash to consider it a major cause of those unhealthy eating habits.

  以上就是关于“托福写作开头技巧:背景引入”的内容,希望通过上述内容的学习,大家能够更好的来备考练习,期待大家考试取得高分成绩。


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