关于托福写作部分,评分规则的具体内容,对于大家的备考有很大的影响。所以在备考的初期,大家对于这些规则内容一定熟悉。那么我们可以先从OG中的评分规则入手,具体的这部分内容是什么?下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容,供大家参考!

  我们看一下OG书上的一个开头段例子:

  The importance of the issue raised by the posed statement, namely creating a new holiday for people, cannot be underestimated, as it concerns the very fabric of society. As it stands, the issue of creating a new holiday raises profound implications for the future. However, although the subject matter in general cannot be dismissed lightheartedly, the perspective of the issue as presented by the statement raises certain qualms regarding practical application.

  这个开头段的前两句都在强调话题(create a new holiday)的重要性,属于赘述(redundancy),第三句并没有很直接给出立场,不符合评分标准中的“有效回答问题”。为了获得一个高分,我们需要避免赘述(redundancy)和偏题(digression)。

  其次OG中有个2分的文章,截取每段的第一句话:

  In the following, I will illustrate my opinion by two reasons.

  First of all, honest make the trust stronger between friends or colleagues.

  Secondly, telling a lie always makes things worse not only in work but also in family life.

  On the contrary, sometimes it is better to tell a lie to others, such as telling a lie to a patient.

  作者想给出2个理由,从正反论证说实话在人际关系中的重要性。而第三段的on the contrary, 看似是对比论证,然而并非是描述”撒谎的弊端“,所以结构上会引起困惑。

  写出结构清晰文章两个建议分享

  关于结构清晰,一方面建议大家不要大片背诵模板句式然后进行堆砌。近期的托福考试中写作部分已经有明确要求Do not use memorized examples.如果不能将模板句式巧妙结合所写文章熟练混迹在自己的语言表达之下,那么建议踏踏实实审题。另一方面,平时可以结合历年真题,多训练开门见山的思维方式,然后根据不同的话题补充相应的词汇短语等语料表达,不至于无话可说。

  以上就是关于“托福OG写作的评分规则”的内容,希望通过上述内容的学习,大家能够更好的来备考练习,期待大家有更好的发挥。


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