It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people's views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to deliberately specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable.
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Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs.
本段给出第一个论点，学习感兴趣的课程的好处-激发学习动机，用两句话从正反两个角度-激发学习动机vs职业 倦怠-来论证。好的词汇，比如considerable相当大的，merit优点 ， study motivation学习动机，stimulate刺激， provided that条件是，exert 施以影响，peculiar fascination特殊的魅力 ，career burnout职业倦怠，profit-making jobs高薪职业.
Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized knowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them.
本段给出其他论点，学习感兴趣的课程的好处-挖掘无限潜力、享受学习和职业、将兴趣和职业更好地结合。可参考用词有 tap his or her infinite potentials，career ambition.
Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn high interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder.
让步段，实用性的课程也是有好处的，帮助提升就业竞争力。本段有很多好的表达方式，比如acquisition of pragmatic courses，Sure enough,help one outshine many candidates，secure a decent job，profitable career，climb the career ladder在职业上平步青云.
In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite areas of study.