Recommendatory Models for the First Paragraph

Model 1:江湖救急Speaking of/When it comes to…, some people think that… while others argue that….For me, …

Apply to yes or no/A or B/Enumeration

Model 2: 实用有效I agree/disagree that….Admittedly,…However,…

Only apply to yes or no.

The college years are the best time in a person’s life.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I disagree that the college years are the best time in a person’s life. Admittedly, college often corresponds with a time when people are young, healthy, and physically strong, and those attributes are highly regarded in Western cultures. However, the college years must also be viewed as a period of high stress and a certain uncomfortable dependence. (57) (Barron P648)

Model 3: 从远处走来…:背景+主题+观点:Nowadays, the growth of economy brings a great many changes one of which is the improvement of….This has led to a consequential controversy on what generated the change. One leading view is…while another….

理解1: 这种从远处走来就是把题干中的背景, 如001号题说大家上大学, 就是把这种现象的原因给出来, 经济原因是万经由(万能理由). 所以上面给出一个模板3的模板, 就是由经济起到我们教育的主题.

理解2: 我们也可能采用把题干中的现象展开, 细说一下现在人物是如何的把上大学已经是作为一种义务教育一下, 而不像是十年前的一种少数人的可以实现的梦. 同时也可以强调一下学历的重要性.

In today’s climate where it seems that only talents armed with honorable degrees can gain easy access to the gate towards glory success, people in growing numbers are crowding into the colleges where they will sacrifice their most valuable years in the lifetime. Yet, are the college years that have played an imperative part in a person’s life the best experience? I really doubt it. (65) (Original)

Model 4: 3+1排比Nowadays, for those high students who are struggling in an abominably lot of examinations, college must be the dreaming paradise with no pressure for tests; for those who are avid for a job opportunity, college experience must be the glorious trump; for those who have never and ever roamed on any college campus for some reason, college must be the eternal regret. It seems undeniable that college years are the best time in a person’s life. But I really doubt it. (78) (Original)

总之: 模板1与模板2都是比较容易的一套;模板3与模板4都是题干的背景与成因展开, 模板4更为强调语言的功力, 这两个模板是留给大家一点发展空间.