雅思口语Part2事件类话题关于好的建议即Describe a situation you received some useful advice,可以是选专业、来自父亲的建议、创业顾问建议、出国深造的建议等等,本文为大家提供关于创业顾问建议参考范文,供大家学习。

  Describe a situation you received some useful advice

  You should say:

  Who gave you this advice

  What kind of advice he/she gave you

  Why he/she gave you this advice

  And explain how did the advice help you

  1.适用人群:全适用

  2.主题:创业顾问建议

  3.故事线:当我上大学的时候,我决定在学校所在的街道上开一家咖啡店。我的童年朋友,Jonny是我的顾问。我总是从他那里寻求建议,因为他非凡的智力水平和判断情况的能力。

  When I was in my college, I decided to start a coffee shop at the street where the college was located. My childhood friend, Jonny was my advisor. I always seek advice from him for his extraordinary intellectual level and ability to judge the situations.

  When I described the intention to open up a small business, like a coffee shop, at the college street, Jonny suggested me not to open the shop. Besides, he advised me to keep patience and continue the study. Hearing the suggestion, I was astonished and thought that he might be jealous of my potential earning and success. So, I wanted to avoid him and his advice. He also said that my partner was not a trustworthy man. Moreover, the partner I selected was not insincere and I might not be able to continue the partnership for a long, he commented. Jonny asked me to think about the issue again and again, and then to decide either I will continue or not.

  The advice was extremely useful to me for several reasons. I followed the advice and did not open the business. Jonny told me that there is a skyrocketed competition among the existing coffee shops, and actually, there are a substantial number of small coffee shops in the college street. So, if I opened a new one, I would have to struggle a lot to survive in the business. Moreover, I was wrong in partner selection. Three months later, the man I teamed up with chose another partner, a friend of mine, and opened a new coffee shop at the same place where I intended to run my business. But unfortunately, they failed to attract new customers and keep pace with the immense competition.

  There were some other internal business issues between them, told my friend, like lack of transparency and trust. The advice was beneficial for me as if I started the business with that man, I had to suffer a huge amount of financial loss.

  4.高分口语语料

  地道用词:open up a small business

  continue the study

  a skyrocketed competition

  team up with

  keep pace with

  So, if I opened a new one, I would have to struggle a lot to survive in the business.

  高分句型: I always seek advice from him for his extraordinary intellectual level and ability to judge the situations.

  Jonny asked me to think about the issue again and again, and then to decide either I will continue or not.

  Hearing the suggestion, I was astonished and thought that he might be jealous of my potential earning and success.

  There were some other internal business issues between them, told my friend, like lack of transparency and trust.

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