写作想要得到理想的分数,除了要具备大作文的写作实力之外,小作文当然也不容忽视,尤其是在小作文相对容易得分的情况下。要想答好小作文,以下四点需做到:1.信息全面2. 逻辑清晰3.词句准确4.表达多样。信息量和逻辑结构主要通过审题确定。而词句准确性主要是积累固定表达。这些都是比较容易掌握的。但是表达多样绝对不是那么容易就驾驭的哦!尽管如此,方法总会比问题多!

  以下是剑4满分的考官范文中所有的主语:

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  The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

  On average, 11% of all households(百分数), comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those(代词) consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

  Couples(名词) generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion(比重) were living in poverty at this time.

  Older people(名词) were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

  Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

  总结起来那些变来变去的主语无非就是:百分数,代词,名词,比重(或趋势)。那么请根据这个结论,自己试着写写下面表格中的数据,暂时忽略逻辑问题,只关注主语变化问题。

  (1)百分数——In Europe, 9.8% of land was degraded by deforestation, comprising the largest proportion among the three regions.

  (2)比重——In contrast, a much smaller proportion of this reason causing 1.7% land to degrade in Oceania.

  (3)名词——Overgrazing in Oceania was the most dominant cause of land degradation, with 11.3%.

  (4)名词——North America suffered more from over-cultivation, consisting of 3.3% out of 5%.

  (5)代词——Total land degradation in Europe was as much as 23% while that of Oceania followed behind with 13% and the least part (比重)was taken by America (accounting for only 5% altogether).

  是不是已经能够更灵活地完成小作文了呢?别说做不到,也许只是练习量没达到。加油鸭鸭!

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