在雅思写作考试中,好的开头往往能吸引考官的注意,而下面这几种开头不仅会影响考官的心情,而且还会直接影响我们的分数。接下来小编为大家总结了一些容易被扣分的开头,希望各位考生能提前做准备,避免在考试中使用这些开头。

  1.中式英文

  Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

  >>In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

  Topic 2- The population problem

  >>The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

  >>I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

  >>Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

  2.观点模糊态度暧昧

  Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  >>I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

  3.偏离主题

  Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

  >>I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

  4.语法错误惨不忍睹

  Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

  >>About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

  5.过分简单没有重点

  Topic-The importance of environmental protection

  >>This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

  6.用词不当 表达不准

  Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  >>I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

  7.意思重复原地踏步

  Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

  >>My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

  8.中国俗语胡乱翻译(哈哈哈哈哈哈哈)

  Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

  >>I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

  正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children

  Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

  >>We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”……

  Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  >>Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

  >>I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

  9.观点武断 态度强硬

  Topic1-The importance of confidence

  >>In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

  Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

  >>I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

  以上是小编为大家带来的“雅思写作考试中容易被扣分的几种开头”相关内容,无论是在备考的哪个阶段,考生一定要注意练习和总结,有效的练习和方法是我们提升写作的关键,预祝各位考生能顺利在考试中收获满意成绩。


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