Describe a time that you gave advice to others
You should say:
Who you gave advice to
What the advice was
Why you gaveadvice
And explain how you felt about the advice
上学期的考试周前，我的好朋友面临4门考试，有两篇论文即将截止，周末还要参加志愿服务工作。她不仅感到完成所有任务压力很大，还难以专注于任何一项。我是个擅长规划时间的人，论文和复习任务都 在有条不紊地进行中，因而基于自己的日常经验，建议她制定细致的时间安排表，每个时间段只关注一项 任务，并且劳逸结合。我是规划时间的受益者，因而非常乐意与好朋友分享自我管理的心得，也很有信心
To most students, the time before the exam week is most often a nightmare. Many share the experience of being put on edge by the overwhelming workload and troubled by the immense anxiety as the exam week approaches (随着考试周临近，很多人都有被工作量和焦虑情绪支配，感到应接不暇的经历). At the end of last semester, my best friend was struggling with 4 upcoming exams, 2 approaching paper deadlines and routine volunteer work at the weekends. Her being overwhelmed by the quantity and urgency of those tasks (独立主格结构，任务量和紧急性都让她难以承受), not only was she under huge pressure to accomplish insurmountable workload, she also found herself unable to concentrate on each one with the anxiety about not finishing the rest on time. (not only (but) also 倒装，她不仅感到完成所有任务压力很大，还因为对完不成其他任务感到焦虑，难以专注于其中任何一项。) Adept at time-management, (擅长时间规划) I managed to cope with my exam preparations and paper deadlines easily, which naturally made me the one to turn to for advice in hertime of need. Based on my own personal experience, I advised her to comb through her tasks andmake a detailed timetable based on their urgency and priority, focusing on one task at a time. Toalternate between work and rest also enhanced efficiency. Being a faithful practitioner of time-management, I benefited immensely from making and following individualized timetables.Therefore, I was more than willing to share my experience with those who encounteredmultitaskingsituations, being confident about the effectiveness of my advice. I was also willing to endorse faithin the fact that she would survive the crazy exam week by easing her anxiety, improving her studyefficiency and concentrating on individual tasks one at a time to break down her workload into smaller chunks(我有信心她能够通过合理规划时间，缓解焦虑情绪，提高学习效率，更专注于每一项任务，从而顺利度过繁忙的考试周).