在雅思写作备考中,很多考生都会去准备模板,那么模板怎么用?有的时候模板用不对,不仅不会提高我们的分数,而且还会给考官留下一种套用模板的印象。接下来小编为大家介绍一下雅思写作模版的运用方法,希望通过两个例子来帮助大家掌握模板的使用方法。

  我们看看下面这个题目两个学生的段落,还有我的段落对比。

  Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  第一个学生 (用了模板)

  Many people think that narrowing the gap between the rich and the poor helps create a happier society (为了套模板,抄了题目,考官要看到的是真正的观点).one main reason is that (还是模板,但是这句话说的是社会不公平的坏处,前面一句话说的是贫富减少的好处,两句话中间思维跳跃)imbalance social distribution causes some argument and these argument can pose a threat to the society. For example (再套模板,这个例其实根本就不是例子,例子是解释前面名名词的东西), the crime rate may decrease because the poor can afford their living cost and they feel happy because they be treated equality in the society instead of classifying by their property.

  第二个学生 (用了素材)

  Less differences between people from different backgrounds make it easier for them to share equal access to social resources such as educational oppurtunities, health care etc. by doing so, people can make the same success. For instance, a student from disadvanteged family can also become a high caliber one. When people all can fulfill their potential and succeed in their own businesses, there would not be discriminations (用了素材的观点,没有歧视,而这里的上下文根本不可能提到歧视,逻辑一下就乱了). So, people feel happier.

  下面是我的段落

  Closing the gap between rich and poor requires governments to pay attention to the well-being of poor people and take action to ensure that these people lead a happy life. For example, these people can go to college and have the same opportunities to get better-paying jobs as those from rich families. They can get rid of poverty and enjoy a reasonable standard of living. This is a vital part of a happy society. In contrast, crimes can be rampant in a society where people are at a disadvantage due to their social status.

  以上是小编为大家带来的“雅思写作模板使用要慎重”相关内容,无论是在备考的哪个阶段,考生一定要注意练习和总结,预祝各位考生能顺利在考试中收获满意成绩。


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