Describe a crowded place you went to
You should say：
When you went there
Why you went there
Who you went there with
And explain how you felt about it
拥挤的地方是迪士尼乐园，当我还是个孩子的时候，我就想去参观迪士尼乐园，我总是为它们动画片中 的角色着迷。 当我在乐园参观的时候，看到故事中的城堡我十分开心，在像真的森林一样的乐园餐厅吃饭也让我感觉十分的快乐。 唯一令我遗憾的是哪里总是有特别多的人。
The crowded place I went to and want to talk about is Disneyland in shanghai. Two years ago， my mom and I visited shanghai for two weeks， and we spent the weekend in Disneyland there. The reason why we went there was that I had always dreamt of going to Disneyland since I started to watch cartoon shows and movies produced by Disney. I dreamt about taking photos with the characters (角色)in the movies， and riding all the roller coasters (云霄飞车) there. The trip was full of surprises. I felt that I was in the fairytales(童话) once I saw the castles in those stories were built in the center of the theme park. What surprises me most was that the cafés and canteens in the park are designed to look at mushrooms in the cartoons. When we had lunch there， it feels that we had meal in the real forest. What I didn’t like in the park was that Disneyland was full of people. Every adventure(冒险) we wanted to try， there was a long queue(队伍) that we had to wait for at least an hour. Because of the crowds， I didn’t manage to watch the fireworks in the castle in the evening. What a shame. If I have the chance to go to Disneyland one more time， I would go there during the weekdays when there are few people around.