在雅思写作考试中,小作文中静态图是主要考试题型,主要是对图形中不同的数据进行对比,没有时间上的变化,这种就是静态图表,比如柱状图,饼状图,表格这些都是静态图。接下来小编为大家分享一下雅思小作文静态图范文,方便大家参考。

  静态图表的例题解析

  (一)图表

  You may spend about 20 minutes on this task.

  The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons if necessary.

  You should write about 150 words.

  

  (二)范文分析

  1、Part 1: Introduction

  The bar chart here reflects 5 different levels of post-school qualifications as well as the proportion of qualification-holders according to gender in Australia in 1999.

  (1)表示开头段介绍句的句型

  The bar chart here reflects 5 different levels of post-school qualifications as well as the proportion of qualification-holders according to gender in Australia in 1999.

  (2)该句可以做成句型:

  The 图表名称+(given/here/provided)+describe/demonstrate/depict/ details/ display/ illustrate/ indicate/ represent/reflect............

  (3)该句可以改写成:

  Given in the 图表名称is the information/are figures regarding/concerning/about/on............

  A glance at the + 图表名称+provided/here/given + reveals/indicates.........

  2、Part 2: Main Body

  Main Body 1:

  Apparently, there is a striking/remarkable contrast/gap in the proportion of both genders who attained skilled vocational diploma. More precisely, men in this level reached/accounted for 90%, +

  ,which is nine times as much as their female counterparts.

  , and women’s percentage was only 10%.

  , nine times as much as females.

  + What should be emphasized is that both data ranked the most and the least among five level.

  (1)主体段落开头必备

  副词

  clearly, .../ obviously, .../ apparently, .../ evidently, ...

  短语:

  According to the table/data, .......

  In accordance with the table/data, .....

  That从句:

  It can be seen from the + 图表+that ......

  We can see from the + 图表+that ......

  It appears from the data that ......

  It indicates from the table that.......

  As从句:

  As we can see from the data/table, ......

  As we can see from the data/ table, .......

  As is reflected in the table, ......

  (2)主体段落写作必备

  表示平/倍数/比值关系的句型

  men in this level reached/accounted for 90%, which is nine times as much as their female counterparts.

  该句可以做成句型:A + be +(表示倍数或比值的数字)+as +形容词的平+as B

  其他变通例句:

  Canada received/had/welcomed more than twice/half as many foreign visitors as Mexico.

  The number of visitors to these two countries from both UK and USA was the same/similar.

  North America (16% of the area and 8% of the population) and South America (12% of the area and 5.5% of the population) have populations equal to about half of what has been expected.

  Main Body 2

  However, /Conversely,/on the other hand, the percentage of females was somewhere 65% and 55% (respectively) at the level of undergraduate diploma and Bachelor’s degree, It should deserve mentioning that the highest females’ percentage and the lowest males’ percentage occurred at the level undergraduate diploma.

  表示比较的句型

  the percentage of females was somewhere 65% and 55% (respectively) at the level of undergraduate diploma and Bachelor's degree, +说法1:surpassing/ outweighing/exceeding that of males (approximately 35% and 45%).

  +说法2:, both of which were (30% and 20%)higher than that of males by (30% and 20%).

  +说法3 , with males’ 30% and 20% lower.

  其他例句:

  France received a larger total number of foreign visitors than any of the other countries on the list.

  Africa's population is about a third smaller than what would be expected (20% of the area and 13% of the population).

  Also is the fact that men are far more likely to offend than women.

  Also more popular in 1995 was talking with friends, at 26% compared to 21% a decade earlier/a previous decade.

  As can be see from the chart, the car was a much less popular household item in the 1960s than it is today.

  表示高的句型

  What should be emphasized is that both data ranked the most and the least among five level.

  It should deserve mentioning that the highest females’ percentage and the lowest males’ percentage occurred at the level undergraduate diploma.

  其他高句型:

  Europe is the second densest continent, occupied 7% of areas and 12% of population in the world. (会改写一下吗?)

  Asia has the largest percentage of the total land area (30%) and Oceania has the least (6%).

  The sparest continent is Oceania, which has 6% of area and 0.5% of population.

  Asia is the largest continent in terms of both area (30%) and population (61%).

  It is noticeable that Middle East produced the biggest amount of oil (22.2 million barrels), which was nearly five times of the amount of the daily oil consumption.

  Clearly, watching TV was the number one leisure activity/the most popular/was the most favored/enjoyed the greatest popularity/was the most widely enjoyed in both years, at 32% in 1985 and a slightly lower 30% in 1995.

  Watching TV was regarded/rated as the most enjoyed/favored/preferred in both years.

  However, by 1995 this figure stood at 27%---the second highest overall.

  It can be seen from the third chart that actions games were by far the best selling genre, constituting 42% of the electronic game sales in Korea.

  Finally, Egypt is where the most striking gender difference is found.

  Main Body 3:

  What is interesting, at the higher level, the percentage of males who got postgraduate diploma and Master’s degree roughly doubled that of females (75% vs. 30%, 60% vs. 40% respectively).

  3、Part 4: Conclusion

  As can be summarized from the overall comparison, the proportion of females who possessed undergraduate diploma or Bachelor's degree is more than males’, while a reversed trend in other 3 levels is true.

  (1)表示结尾段的句型

  As can be summarized from the overall comparison, the proportion of females who possessed undergraduate diploma or Bachelor's degree is more than males’, while a reversed trend in other 3 levels is true.

  结尾的衔接结构还可以写成:

  In conclusion, ......; In summary, ……; To conclude, ……;

  By and large, In general=generally, overall

  It can be seen that……

  As can be seen from……, ……

  It indicates that…….

  (2)表示数据对比总结的句型:

  the proportion of females who possessed undergraduate diploma or Bachelor's degree is more than males’, while a reversed trend in other 3 levels is true.

  还可以写成:

  females’ proportion in terms of undergraduate diploma or Bachelor's degree is more than males’, while the trend/picture/story/situation in other 3 levels is just contrary/opposite/reverse.

  以上是小编为大家准备的雅思小作文静态图范文以及解析,小作文静态图表总体难度相对较大,考生在备考中一定要多加练习,充分理解考题考察的重点,在对数据信息进行合理的表述。


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