Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, believe that people should have the freedom of choosing sporting activities they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2014.8.9)
People who believe that all kinds of dangerous sports should be prohibited may seriously concern about the probable consequences the dangerous sports might result in, such as injury and death. A convincing case in point is that even the professional athletes are likely to get injured if they are engaged in such physical activities as boxing and wrestling, which would probably bring negative effects to their normal life. But it seems difficult for the government to draw a clear line between the safe and dangerous sports. If sports like football and basketball are banned, there would be a conflict between a significant number of fans and the government. This is largely because those sports gain tremendous popularity worldwide.
On the contrary, others hold the view that people should be free to choose whatever sports they prefer, regardless of its danger. It appears reasonable for people to make their own decisions, because adults are rational enough to distinguish whether they are capable of participating in those sports so that they could avoid the detrimental consequences. However, children are so immature and, which means unexpected consequences of participating in dangerous sports still exist.
这篇文章在写作过程中容易出现的问题是观点的重复与不对应，考生往往在解释说明两种观点的时候容易涉及A与B同时关联的内容。比如：在解释说明观点A时，有考生写道：“government should not ban dangerous sports, since most people participate in this kind of sports after understanding the hidden risks and they enjoy challenging themselves ”。这一观点虽然正确，但是却与B观点的支持句“adults are rational enough to distinguish whether they are capable of participating in those sports so that they could avoid the detrimental consequences”如出一辙，这样不但造成了论述的重复性，对于A观点的分析也不够充分。那么我们选择放弃因果展开，而从假设展开的角度思考，假如危险运动真的被禁止会怎么样，很容易想到的是，大多数运动都有大批爱好者甚至狂饭，这显然是不合理因素有力的证明之一。另外需要提示的是，考生在论述中不要忽视对合理部分的支持论证。题目本身确实有争议性，也会有人考虑到危险运动的不良后果，这是连专业运动员也无法避免的伤病甚至死亡。只有做到客观论述才能拿到理想分数。