Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
开头段：背景介绍 + 个人立场
主体段1：(赞同/反对有难度的爱好才好玩)理由 1 + 论证
主体段2：(赞同/反对有难度的爱好才好玩)理由 2 + 论证
结尾段：总结理由 + 重申观点
背景句：Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge.
个人立场：Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.
主题句：On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies.
平行列举 + 递进解释：One example of an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment, it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to swim at my local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures without knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.
主题句：On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting.
递进解释 + 举例：If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level of performance because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater.
总结理由 + 重申观点：简单的爱好有趣令人放松，有难度的爱好同样充满乐趣，两者各有其因。
In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.
It feels like ... 给人以某种感觉
The technicalities of ... 某事的专业技术性
Despite being/doing ... 尽管,就算
On the one hand, On the other hand 一方面，另一方面
sense of satisfaction/feeling of achievement 成就感，满足感
It takes me ... before .... 我花了多久才