Some people think giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
开头段：背景介绍 + 阐明立场(认为消极后果多于积极效应)
主体段 1：理由 1 + 论证
主体段 2：理由 2 + 论证
结尾段：重申自我观点 + 汇总理由
背景句：In the era of globalization, offering aid to economically disadvantaged countries is becoming one of the priorities on the international agenda. However, many people hold a pessimistic opinion that giving aid to poorer countries would bring more negative impacts than positive effects.
个人观点：I personally agree with this standpoint and my reasons will be illustrated as followed.
主题句：Firstly, directly giving aid, such as financial support and humanitarian rescue, is only effective in solving the most urgent social problems.
递进解释 + 平行列举： 资金和物质援助能帮助穷困地区缓解自然灾害、饥饿和疾病等紧迫问题，但难以解决政治动荡和极度贫困等长期社会问题。
Providing financial and material aid to impoverished regions can cope with emergencies like natural disasters, famine, and diseases. However, the long-term issues, such as political instability, extreme poverty, and the scarcity of educational and medical resources, can’t be alleviated simply by international aid.
主题句：Secondly, giving aid to poorer countries is inevitably politically motivated, meaning that a certain number of aid-giving countries have been forced into the mission.
As the reluctant help-providers, the economically stronger nations have spent millions or billions in providing financial, material, technological and even military assistance. Such a huge expenditure would invariably affect the local development of rich countries, which has aroused scepticism and even objection among the citizens.
Nevertheless, the positive effects brought about by the international aid can’t be denied. Giving aid to poorer countries does help solving the most immediate problems and even boost international collaboration on business and trade. But to achieve sustainable development of economy, education, technology and other industries, all countries have to find their own specific ways rather than relying on external aid.
重申观点 + 汇总理由：援助穷国的消极后果更多，因为这只能解决短期问题，治标不治本。
Therefore, I believe the negative impacts of giving aid to poorer countries outweigh its positive effects, since it only solves short-term issues and it might affect the development of the aid-giving countries.
agenda n. 日程，计划
financial support 资金援助
humanitarian rescue 人道主义救援
impoverished adj. 贫瘠的，赤贫的
scarcity n. 缺乏，匮乏
scepticism n. 怀疑，质疑