The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
背景句：Economic and technological developments lead to the increasing production of commodities. However, the mass production of various commodities has caused great damage to our environment.
写作目的：The causes of this problem and the solutions to address it will be discussed.
主题句：Two major reasons contribute to the excessive production of consumer goods.
递进解释 + 平行列举：人们收入和消费水平的提高;工业和科技发展提高商品产量。
Two major reasons contribute to the excessive production of consumer goods. First, the increase of people's income, along with their rising consumption needs, has lead to the rapid growth of market demand of various commodities. Second, industrial development and technological advancement bring about mass production and e-commerce, which enables the manufacturers to meet the huge market demand of consumer goods.
主题句: In addition, the production and consumption of commodities inevitably result in environmental pollution.
递进解释 + 举例：工厂排放大量污染物 + 消费者环保意识的缺失。
Without applying green technology, many factories generate a large quantity of waste and exhaust, which is, apparently, a long-term and severe environmental issue. What's worse, many consumers are not aware of the importance of protecting the natural environment. Accessories made from real leather are always in demand, but customers of such kind of products are not alerted by how much damage the production would cause for certain species.
主题句：Feasible solutions are called for to deal with the negative impacts of commodity consumption on the environment.
Mass media could use advertisements to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Manufacturers should adopt environmental-friendly materials and techniques to reduce waste. Besides, the government should supervise industries during their production and set up laws and regulations to restrict the emission of factory waste.
mass production 大规模生产
inevitably adv. 难以避免地
manufacturer n. 生产商，制造者
supervision n. 监督
emission n. 排放