The most important thing of people’s life is his or her work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
背景句：An increasing portion of the population has been joining the workforce, and many people assert that the most significant thing in one's life is his or her career. Without a satisfying job, life is deemed meaningless.
个人观点：However, I strongly oppose this opinion and firmly believe that life could still be full of meanings even without a satisfying career.
主题句：I disagree with such a statement and believe that life could still be full of significance even without a satisfying job.
平行列举+递进解释：Being successful in career does not guarantee people’s ability to find the true meaning or purpose of their life, nor does financial abundancy always ensure mental satisfaction. Many professionals with remarkable achievements in work can still feel lost when it comes to searching for the meaningfulness of their personal life.
主题句：Secondly, job itself is never the sole criterion to judge if one’s life is meaningful or not.
平行列举+递进解释：Apart from career, a huge number of other factors also determine the meaningfulness and purpose of one's life, such as family life, physical health, mental well-being, and social relationship. If a person sacrifices his attention or devotion to all those factors only for the sake of his job, then, no matter how successful his career could be, the meaningfulness of his life is already impaired.
Some people might argue that career should be prioritized since it brings forth financial reward which is fundamental and indispensable for one to make other achievements. Despite that, the importance of career shouldn't undermine the significance of family, relationship, hobbies and many other factors, because they realize the completeness and uniqueness of a human's lifetime.
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