Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
开头段：背景介绍 + 个人立场
主体段 1：(赞同/反对父母和老师是否是造成青少年犯罪的原因)理由 1 + 论证
主体段 2：(赞同/反对父母和老师是否是造成青少年犯罪的原因)理由 2 + 论证
结尾段：总结理由 + 重申观点
背景介绍：It does seem to be true that parents find teachers have lost the authority they used to have, especially in the eyes of teenagers. They are no longer seen as models for behavior: hard work, politeness and other positive qualities are seen as old fashioned. Many young people have no respect for these qualities or the people who represent them. In fact, I think when young people today are so rebellious that it's possible that both parents and teachers are afraid to exercise their authority.
个人立场：However, I do not agree that this is the basic reason for the increase in teenage violence.
主题句：While I believe it is true that a lack of social and emotional learning contributes to the problem. Other factors are surely involved: economic factors, for example.
递进解释：If a child comes from a poor family and they live in low-quality housing in all undesirable area, this is sure to affect the child, however loving the parents are.
主题句：There is also the question of who your friends are.
递进解释：I believe that when you are in your teens your friends have more influence on you than your parents or teachers. At that age, you want to be part of a group, or even a gang, and this might lead to breaking the law in a number of ways.
总结理由 + 重申观点：总之，虽然我同意父母和老师缺乏社交和情感学习是青少年暴力增长的一个因素，但我不认为这是唯一或主要原因。
In conclusion, while I agree that lack of social and emotional learning from parents and teachers is a factor in the growth of teenage violence, I do not believe that it is the only or main cause.
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