Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above views?
开头段：背景介绍 + 个人立场
主体段 1：(赞同/反对读大学是否是找到好工作的必要条件)理由 1 + 论证
主体段 2：(赞同/反对读大学是否是找到好工作的必要条件)理由 2 + 论证
结尾段：总结理由 + 重申观点
背景句：It is probably true to say that most people believe that a university degree is the only way to get a good job.
个人立场：I think this is true in certain areas, while in other areas, a degree is not as useful.
主题句：Most employers will be more impressed by a candidate who has a degree than they would be by one who only has high school qualifications because it shows a certain level of intelligence and education, as well as the commitment and self-discipline that is needed In order to study a degree course for three or four years.
举例论证：To begin with, many people have ambitions to become a qualified professional and there is no doubt that becoming a doctor or a lawyer, for example, is only possible with a degree. Another advantage of graduating from university is that it gives you more choices when it comes to choosing a job.
主题句：On the other hand, there might be some benefit to starting your career early, especially if your chosen field is one which does not typically require a university education.
举例论证：This would apply to somebody who wants to be a car mechanic, or a fashion designer, for instance, who would not necessarily gain anything from going to university. The hands-on experience you gain in your job while others are studying for a degree can give you a distinct advantage. I once read about a man who left school at sixteen and went on to become a wealthy and successful investment broker. He claimed that he had learned all he needed to know by working in his chosen field and that he could not have done any better by getting a degree.
总结理由 + 重申观点：虽然没有上大学就找到一份好工作是可能的。但一些职业，如法律，要求你拥有学位，如上所述，大学学位可能会在寻找工作时打开更多的门。
So, to conclude, it is possible to get a good job without going to university. Having said that, some professions, such as the law, require you to have a degree and as stated above a University degree could potentially open more doors when looking for a job.
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