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  Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  学生背景:上海某大学大一学生,高考英语100分左右。在智课培训1个月后首次考雅思就达到写作6分。

  Women and men have different potential to do various jobs. Some people believe that women and men have their certain jobs separately. Yet others argue the job, rather than done by certain genders, are appropriate to all people. As far as I am concerned, both male and female can do all kinds of job successfully.

  On one hand, differences exist between different genders. It is always said that men have a more logical brain and women are often patient and careful. To begin with, the brain of male and female is sometimes different on the logic, so the men are more suitable to do job about science. Besides, women are always more patient than men, so they can do job like secretary. Women are always careful.

  On the other hand, all jobs are set reasonable to everyone. Firstly, most jobs are easy for everyone if they work hard enough. Many jobs purely rely on the perseverance, which means, no matter men or women, they can do the job ideally. In addition, in the recent years, many women replace the men in some certain job, which prove that women can also do men’s job. In the history, men are bread winners. By the contrary, nowadays, women are always the brace of the whole family finance. The reasons for this trend may involve the reality that women are proved to be more capable.

  To sum up, although many people think that men and women should do certain job, I argue that all people have the ability to do their work well regardless male or female.

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